The Rag Doll Girl

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One night Rachel heard a knock on her door at around midnight. She went to get it thinking it was her friend, to drunk to get home. When she opened the door she saw a girl. The girl looked like she was about eight years old. The young girl asked if she could come in. Rachel of course oblige. She would let the girl stay the night, and have someone retrieve her in the morning. When the young girl came into Rachel's home she immediately sat in the corner. Rachel was a little thrown off by this, but didn't think to much on it. Rachel asked the young girl what her name was. Her name was Lilly. Rachel had later found out why Lilly was at her house. Lilly had been abused by her mother. Rachel went into the kitchen to make the little girl some hot chocolate.  when Rachel turned away, Lilly's appearance changed, now she looked like she was being held together by sutures. She becomes as cold as death. It was as if she had turned into a dead girl who's body is only together, because of the seams from the sutures. Rachel cam back horrified at what had become of the little girl. She checked for a pulse. There was none. By instinct, Rachel immediately called 911. The police came and retrieved the body. Rachel thought it was over until the next morning when the young girls body was back in the exact spot. This happened for the next month. Rachel was now living with her friend. She was to afraid to go back into her house. She thought the girl was gone, and that this problem was over. About a year later. Rachel woke up to the sound of glass breaking down stairs. She thought of it as nothing but her friend throwing an empty beer bottle across the room. Her friend had done this on numerous occasions. Then she heard a scream. She would've gotten up, but she was frozen with fear. Minutes later she heard foot steps coming up the stairs. Then She heard a voice saying "Rachel." Rachel immediately recognized the voice. It was Lilly's. A few seconds later Lilly was standing in the doorway holding a knife in one hand, and a large spool of thread with a needle attached to the end in the other. Lilly cut off Rachel's arm. She screamed in terror, until Rachel slit her throat.

Excerpt from local news paper:

2 girls found in house dead

Police are on the search for the murderers of Rachel Woods and Liz Adam. These girls were found dead on 8/9/03 and were believed to be killed the night before. The killer had cut off their limbs and sewn them back together. The only obvious clue the killer left was a note reading "now you're a doll too." Keep all your doors and windows locked. The town has set a curfew of 6pm.
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RobotdragonX's avatar
This is actually pretty good. Though (in my op) the psychological part of it could have played a little bit more into the story, but that's just nitpicking a little.

Nice job :)